Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

A broken hearts pain 
Is agony of the worst 
Twisting, searing
A tearing of the guts
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Stewart Ross
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 10 April 2012

As long as the heart gets mended, it can not be broken permanently. I think that is the reason we are comparing the emotions to that of a heart.. You have brought out the feelings of a broken heart. Well written!

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Dave Walker 10 April 2012

A great poem with true emotion, like it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, A True Poem About Drugs.

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