Thursday, November 17, 2011

Broken Comments

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Awakened by the faint melody of laughter,
faint and decresent the sound has become,
sleep stricken I stumble upon the ground,
Where is such happiness, that falls upon my ear?
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Lenore Lee 18 November 2011

Oh, darling. Such a sweet, sad write. As always it was extremely beautiful.

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Darkangel Flyfree 18 November 2011

I loved how you turned it to your self 'I know now to be me' awesome poem. I can feel your pain. There are so many of us out their, I didn't relise. Keep up the great work with your words.

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Silentpoet Grl 17 November 2011

Phenomenal! i Could picture every line as i was reading - Truly a fantastic write!

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Bella Hernandez 17 November 2011

DEEP! and completely amazing never knew so much pain could be explained within one poem! ~Bella

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that girl who no one likes 17 November 2011

i love your poem, it; s really great and deep.. i can relate

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Shadow Girl 17 November 2011

wow...this was really deep and thought provoking...great flow...loved it. -SG xo

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