Broken Comments

WELL WRITTEN... YOU MADE ME RELIVE WHAT ONCE WAS, BUT THIS TIME AROUND I LAUGHED INSTEAD OF CRY; -)

Ouch! I know this feeling well DG! I hope you find solace in the muse at least, I did and do. Smiling at you, Tai Aciiiiids friend

thanks for the emotion! ! ..felt it! ! ..excellent write! !

Wow! Indeed the pain inflicted by another is a deep one. Very good write.

Nice. Dude, what ever happened to you?

Well written! Loved it- Beau Golden

i feel ur pain more than evr. amanda :)

oh! what a piece of poem....excellent man.....

Amazing, it all flows together, makeing the perfect mind image.

wow, writing like a teenager first broken heart experience.

Very powerfull. I like the way you use words in this poem.