Monday, January 16, 2006

Broken Comments

Rating: 3.2

I am broken,
You just can't see it,
Maybe because you are blinded how happy I am pretending to be,
You broke me once,
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Jennifer Cook
COMMENTS
Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

great poem but very sad overall it was a good poem.

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Sam Finley 23 March 2006

oohhhh great you seem so sad your poems are greatly sad and great your work reminds me of pain and heart break such words heh great just nice go for your passion

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Mickey Pig Knuckles 16 January 2006

Oh Jennifer, I was sad by this here poem but glad I get to read your glowing works of poetry as you write from the heart which makes poetic perfection. I really appreciated the emotional content of this poem as you reached right out and pulled this reader right into you as the warmness of emotional content of your beating heart was vividly felt. Yes being broken is a part of life but let me add that even though one may be forever scared something better is out there and when your heart starts speaking listen to it carefully as your heart may never miss guide you. Thank You so much for sharing your gift of poetry and especially for giving us a little of you. Wonderful poem. Please keep your poetic pens ink flowing so your beautiful words of poetry will keep growing. Your Friend, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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Uriah Hamilton 16 January 2006

Life leaves everyone broken, the human way.

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