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very emotional write touching

a very moving write. very emotional

tiffany.......this is a lovely one......your emotions show in every line.good work!

Wow! Simply beautiful, so emotional. It brought tears to my eyes

in your verses there is that kind of pure feeling that only gifted not gained you writing your words from u heart big heart with young soul splashing out colorful and spritual poems thank u keep up always like that

Another good write! ! I give it a 10 :)

i give it a ten, nice writing. keep at it, the more you write, the better you get

Fantastic! Good depth

Wonderfull is all I can say. :)

Your use of speed to give your poem a frantic nature after the line I bolt upright Is truly a gift. But I must admit I am left in a frantic state like something is missing. Now don't get me wrong I really enjoyed and liked this poem It is my favorite out of all of yours. *****just a suggestion******* try this Who will be there Someone who really cares Now I know I don't have to be alone anymore Now I finally know........... For him My wounds will grow old.

Awww this one about made me cry. So sweet and beautiful poem. You are very talented, keep it up! ! !