I had from the start
Carried a broken heart
One which endured all grief
And always found a way to forgive
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nice write.the way you have managed your heart is praiseworthy.expressed intelligently.
i fell inlove with your last two lines-i don't know but i feel like crying, i think you nailed it all, you got as i awe i like the words.
It says so much in such less time. Wonderful way of expressing.
I like your poem mostly the last line you told the readers that heart is a precious so everyone may not break any heart sorry, my English is bad :)
Nicely written. You are so honest in the words you write. A heart can be healed but, never fixed we can only hope we become stronger. Really liked this poem 10+++
Whispering Rose, you have such a lovely, honest way of expressing emotion in your poems. You write lines that penetrate one's heart like- My heart was fixed, not healed I realized my heart was made of glass It can be fixed but never to be the same Very moving words.
A broken heart is often the birth place of greatness.
Things once broken once can never be the same so is a heart, but broken heart is very near and dear to God. May God heal your heart!
We all have broken hearts in one way or another. That's why it is so easy to love people, we can all relate to each other. Keep writing
Well described emotions.. A broken heart has its own beauty..i love mine. :)
It's been long this way; but, life goes on. Nice work.