Friday, March 12, 2010

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

A single question has brought it all back again,
Even though it was asked so innocently,
I remember,
I can smell the smells
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Lora Cooley
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Aleksander Kursanov 01 May 2010

Repulsive but then magnetic exposition!

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Kassiah Gervaise 14 March 2010

oh my god i understand everything you said there it painted a picture in my mind of my past...the same happen to me you see and when i read this poem it gave me a sinking feeling in my gut, that poem is so strong and full of emotion just like the real thing, i wrote a poem like this it's called (rape of innocents) read it if you wish or no but i must say that was a brilliant poem i know that poetry is the only way i can let the pain out so thank you for writing this thank and you have a wonderful day Lora :)

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Jillian Bills 12 March 2010

this poem is really painful to read. The way you described it made me feel present.

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Lora Cooley

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