Broken Comments

Repulsive but then magnetic exposition!

oh my god i understand everything you said there it painted a picture in my mind of my past...the same happen to me you see and when i read this poem it gave me a sinking feeling in my gut, that poem is so strong and full of emotion just like the real thing, i wrote a poem like this it's called (rape of innocents) read it if you wish or no but i must say that was a brilliant poem i know that poetry is the only way i can let the pain out so thank you for writing this thank and you have a wonderful day Lora :)

this poem is really painful to read. The way you described it made me feel present.