Thursday, November 5, 2009

Broken Comments

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My heart is breaking
My body's shaking
And my lips are faking
A smile.
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Nyl Revol
depression
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Aubriana Munoz 05 November 2009

hi i like your poem keep up the work

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

That was sick! I like you questioning who would follow you. that was pretty sweet. all in all the poem flowed smoothly. every line was well connected in telling the story adding up to the total theme of great sadness. wonderful

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