Broken Comments

Portrays how is feels to fall in love when your young

A warning about the difficulties of life.

Wonderful poem...10

This poem was hipnotic to my eyes as I was reading You are a very good writer.

a heartbreak that never was....a day with out tears and moment with you to stay...please don't break my heart.....enigmatic pointless submission of pain.....beautiful piece of broken into pieces for a whole to come again....thank you and God bless....a 10 +

Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!

'Lovely eyes I knew' Rachel Ann Butler

very nice.................

...liked the rhythm in your poem....

A nice rhythmic meaningful poem

fine rhyme nice rhythm! 10+

nice lyric poem, lovely rhymes, thank you for sharing.......10++++++++

wow what a feeling expressed in a vivid way...great one! ! !

people will tend to step on love, but that is their point of view for you said it in the first verse ' i will love you'. great write a ten

The last line says it all.

Fine poem with a good flow of words Nice job....10s

Love expressed in so many ways very nicely.

Very nice poem.. I specially liked you last stanza..It is kinda amusing.. A good poem to start the day..10 regards shan

happy diwali.realy interesting poem.rhyming too is good. voted10 surya

an elements basic love of a child wish to feel the world....this would be also the fundamental emotion of being in love......God bless.....a 10