Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Broken Comments

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As I stare out across the horizon
The golden red rays of the setting sun
The cool sea breeze caresses my icy cheek
My eyes blur as my heart still seeks
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Tui Goodwin
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Patrick A. Martin 19 August 2009

Lovely poem Tui. I hope you've had grieve counselling. You may need it. but this is a well expressed piece of poetry and a nessesary one by the sounds of things.

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