Monday, July 27, 2009

Broken Comments

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broken pieces in my hand
a million small like sand
my heart searching for you so dearly
moving in this fog so unclearly
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Emely Orellana
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 July 2009

Nice poem, Emely. Very well written.

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Luwi Habte 28 July 2009

well, this so nice poem, so sweet and hurtful bit well done Emely Luwi

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