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Excellet poem, (Yea, disasters say so much, So clearly and precisely) Haunting everyone with a pain in heart

'A reflection now you cannot see' Rachel Ann Butler

I kind of wanted the first part of this poem to continue in the same way all the way through, it was like two different poems in one but both good. Ruthy :)

Great poem, I love some of the rhyming, good write well done.

a meaningful beautiful poem, very well penned

Adrian I like the first ten lines a lot..and it conjures up an image of a wicked Queen admiring herself..the second half of the poem see ms to qualify the first ten lines but it is another poem also in itself. Well done. We share some similar pathways and associations I think..your work is rich in metaphor simile etc which is often missing from a lot of poetry.

I would say it does rhyme, and very well put together. A story of how one can fall to pieces, like shards from a mirror. Well done!

a nice poem in free style, i suppose, though not in rhymes