Wednesday, June 24, 2009

? Broken? Comments

Rating: 4.5

Siting on the side walk
Illuminated by street lights
With kids throwing rocks
At someone hurt
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Davion Krustov
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Ashley Hall 24 June 2009

It kinda makes me want to cry because it's so well worded. And it's something i've seen or felt before the feeling it contributes. Very nice.

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Suicidal Magic 24 June 2009

very nicely written... keep up the good work!

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London :) 24 June 2009

well said. you should take a look at my poems. if you want. :)

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Davion Krustov

Davion Krustov

Boulder, Colorado
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