Tuesday, July 22, 2008

~ Broken ~ Comments

Rating: 4.5

Broken inside
You sat and you cried
Thinking it was all your fault
Betrayed by who you thought was a responsible adult
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Ally Tenebrae
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Egi David Perdana 11 October 2008

is broken, on a broken with a broken keep writting

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Aijaz Asif 05 October 2008

falling on he ground like a clinking glass.....very well written indeed, great write....thanx

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Bill Thomas 31 July 2008

It works well, Ally - keep 'em coming!

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Serenity Prayer 29 July 2008

great job. i loved reading it. keep it up.

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Francesca Lam 22 July 2008

wow~ it's well written! i like it! Fran xo

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