Wednesday, January 7, 2009

Broken Comments

Rating: 2.5

She falls to her knees,
Begging him to need her.

She slowly starts to die,
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Shay Mitchell
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Ana Sanchez 10 September 2009

Wow Shay..Tears are falling from my face..Cause for some reason..when I was your age..I felt the same...Not needing to exist no more..I always felt like the outcast in my family..but things turned around for me...Check out some of my work..i would really like ur input.. ;)

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Marisol Smith 05 July 2009

This is honestly up there with one of the best poems I have read. I love it. -Mare

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