Sunday, October 25, 2015

Broken Comments

Rating: 4.8

Broken
By Maria Sharon Moemise

For every word I spake he criticized and mocked
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Ray Hansell 09 August 2020

I enjoyed this poem very much. In fact of your poems I've read I've enjoyed them all. It's clear to see you write from the heart. Keep up the good writing. Ray

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Pregnant with pain is this compelling and creative cry against intimate violence. Well done!

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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2015

If I say that I am deeply touched by this poem, I would say much less than what I have felt after reading it. I am quite disturbed by the account you have given of your miseries, hopelessness and helplessness due to the abuse you have suffered 'in the name of love'. I agree with poet Fabrizio Frosini that those who abuse women and children are not worthy to be called humans. The poem is eloquent, expressive and deep. Well done!

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Maria Sharon Moemise 01 November 2015

Thank you so much for this encouraging review.

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Maria Sharon Moemise 01 November 2015

I thank you so much for this encouraging review, Khairul

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 October 2015

I am against violence, but those who abuse women and children cannot be considered ''persons''.. and should learn upon themselves what ''abuse'' means.. Thanks for sharing, Maria Blessings

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Maria Sharon Moemise 25 October 2015

Thank you so much for your review and for understanding my story, Fabrizio

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