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i love it..... makes a person want to try again

Your somewhat staccato style is interesting but a spell check and re edit before you post is advisable

one thing that i fancy about ur poems is that the simple usage of words that made the poems outstanding...i think some of ur work and mine really has some similarities...'if heaven ever exists' is a good exmaple...

A very good poem, Baden. You should go back and clean up some mis-spelled words, though. No criticism intended. Regards Ron