Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Smiles dont last forever
Sometimes they fade to grey.
Its hard to keep it together.
When your leaving me this way.
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Silence Dogood
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Existential Despair 11 September 2008

i walked in snickering ready look at work that needed polishing, my jaw hit the ground...what a great poem!

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I can relate with you on this one! You have got SO much talent sweetheart! I loved reading this one because I related with it a whole lot. I also learned that not all guys do that to you. You just have to find the guy that doesn't do that, and calls everymorning just to say 'Goodmorning' and again in the evening to say 'Goodnight' and sometimes even randomly in the day just to say 'I love you.' Don't worry about finding him anytime soon. You have your whole life ahead of you...so do I but still. =) Keep writing! These are awesome! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Monkey Mendez 03 September 2008

Guys. They never care about peoples' feelings. This is a great poem. Nice job!

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