Broken Comments

nicely written poem hun..lol i like it good job..

wow, it is so romantic, i even felt a tear in my eye

That it’ll be like ashes Left from a fire That’ll never go out. I really like those lines. good job. *Purkey Girl*

quite explicit, short and beautifuly written...the title reminded me one of my poem 'broken heart'....thanks

very deep, i like it. but never give up. u wont like where it takes u. im not even kidding.

Short and powerful, , BEAUTY! edzacly the rite combernation..great job.