...
Read full text
this is a goog poem i like it alot it sounds like you could of went ferther with it but its good
thats great, but take it farther than die with you, take love to the extent where only you and her can understand...
Hi Kelly, You have definitely written from the heart on this one.....your soul shows strength and with an emotional piece such as this...many will agree with me..that you have an amazing talent....keep expressing *10* best wishes Jon.