Wednesday, November 21, 2007

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I dont know what to believe
i dont know what to say
everything seems to get worse
with each passing day
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Angel of Darkness
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wow thtz gud too! oh in like almost the last line you put' and alone and night' it should be 'and alone at night' but other than tht it waz great!

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X X 21 February 2008

i think you need to add more depth and substance to this.

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Michael Spalding 05 December 2007

Nice poem about young love, don't rush it. It will happen for you and when it does it will be worth the wait. Take care. Best Regards, Michael S.

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