Broken Comments

I enjoyed reading this poem..... nice work..... congrats on being selected......

Beautifully written Danny. I love it from beginning to end. Wel deserving to be acknowledged! Definitely a '10!

There is always hope and love just around the corner..

God can help! So praying to God is the right thing to do, keep it up.

Could have been a beautiful song. This is how a true lover suffers. Liked the way you have spilled the sadness in your heart for unrequited love.10+++

danny, i wonder, having read this poem and your do you ever think fondly of me, if you've put these to music. from your poem symphony, would i be correct in assuming you're a musician? the third line of this poem is vivid- it delves and makes a point. the best of love and all things to you. glen kappy

once again I prayed to god

A very humorous poem. I pray you get your true love! Had me laughing and smiling: mainly because I can relate to the feelings of having one's heart broken. Although I've only had it broken three times. The last love was my husband and I loved him deep, deeply. The game of love is indeed like playing bingo! Very optimistic piece of poetry.

The broken spirit is the metaphor of depressed human struggling for making their mark in life.

Lovely poem reflecting the ways of the world and also about the love remaining one-sided. It is so tormenting. But, one should always be optimistic. Thanks for sharing. I quote: It feels as if a knife delves deep inside I've had many loves that haven't loved me back So, where are all the good girls, you ask I pray to God.... To send me someone from above

if love was only that easy? nice sad poem.

A beautiful and honest poem Danny. It is indeed very hard to find true love.

A broken spirit! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.