Monday, November 2, 2009

Broken (11/2/09) Comments

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She does this
He says that
Tension builds in both wounded hearts
Someone yells
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Kayleigh ....
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Gordon Wilkinson 03 November 2009

So true it happens all the time - simple but effective well done

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Danny H 02 November 2009

Very nice poem! . Bravo

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Gwendalynn Ash 02 November 2009

aww...so sad...i unfortuantly am witnessing just this...great poem though

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