The brittle twigs upon the bough
So frail that surely time must break,
As now this elm bereft of life
Can't brave the winds no more,
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Seeing the beauty in the life that came before us, this is such a moving piece Andrew Thankyou for sharing it Love duncan X
A beautiful write, Andrew. The rhythm in this piece makes reading it such a pleasure, and your wording is excellent. The message is a sad, but all too common one. Thanks, this one is a 10. Richard
Another eloquent and capturing poem Andrew, a great yet sad story! ! *10*! ! Best regards! Friend Thad
Andrew, you most certainly possess a penchant for expressing Nature's intricals & majesty...Excellent Work, once again! ~FjR~ .2008.