Sunday, March 26, 2023

Brittle Leaf Comments

Rating: 4.9

I touch the brittle leaf
And it falls apart
I let the pieces fall onto the ground
And it's buried
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Nosheen Irfan 01 April 2023

There's something sad about the autumn but there's beauty in sadness. You have beautifully captured the essence of autumn in just a few words. Bravo my friend!

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M. Asim Nehal 28 March 2023

Great imagery and nice grave for leaves by the way.5*****

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 27 March 2023

Symbolic write. Nice work, Lee Ann

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Pallavi Tripathi 27 March 2023

Reminds me of Anne Frank's diary. Kind of like Rosebud from the movie Citizen Kane.

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Pallavi Tripathi 27 March 2023

Reminds me of Anne Frank's diary in whi

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Richard Wlodarski 26 March 2023

Reminds me of the tragic life of Sylvia Plath. LeeAnn, you would do her proud! Great work!

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Jayne Louise Davies 26 March 2023

Loved it LeeAnn x Thanks for sharing : )

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Anjandev Roy 26 March 2023

Wonderful short work..........

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Sandra Feldman 26 March 2023

We feel the crumbling of Life's pain within the realization that all we've done has been in vain. Excellently composed!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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