Sunday, February 10, 2008

Brittle Fidelity Comments

Rating: 4.4

When indigo fingers of dusk
had stretched them
over last of the coy sunbeams
Creaked a granite
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Rehan Hyder
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A clever piece from which the reader will take what s/he will. t x

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Michael Pruchnicki 19 February 2008

Rehan - Some good imagery here! 'indigo fingers of dusk' 'coy sunbeams' 'clumsy boots of fidelity'

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