Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Brittany By The Sea Comments

Rating: 4.3

She reaches,
For the pearl handled brush.
As he reaches behind her,
Pulling pins from her hair...
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Junepaulette GasrelTibbetts
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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2014

A lovely romantic poem beautifully penned. I like the articulation of the narrative piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Allan Farran 15 March 2014

Thanks for the poem very interesting really enjoyed it

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James George 13 March 2014

Beautifully written. I rarely come across a poem that makes me feel i need to comment but commendations are in order

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Stephen W 13 March 2014

Beautiful, romantic poem. People shouldn't join the army.

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Timothy Rosenbaum 14 March 2012

I was very touched by this poem. Quite beautiful. I loved the flow of it, the give and the take. Pulled me in!

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Cody Maxie 13 March 2012

Really liked reading this, added to fav poets list, good job!

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Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

a real wonderful poem, very well written.....10

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Make love not war.The most bittersweet parting is when the one you love leaves for deployment.A ten from me Sis.

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Roy Gotaas 11 October 2008

A pleasure to read: thank you.

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Junepaulette GasrelTibbetts

Junepaulette GasrelTibbetts

Queens, New York
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