She reaches,
For the pearl handled brush.
As he reaches behind her,
Pulling pins from her hair...
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Beautifully written. I rarely come across a poem that makes me feel i need to comment but commendations are in order
I was very touched by this poem. Quite beautiful. I loved the flow of it, the give and the take. Pulled me in!
Make love not war.The most bittersweet parting is when the one you love leaves for deployment.A ten from me Sis.
A lovely romantic poem beautifully penned. I like the articulation of the narrative piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.