O man on the hill you sent us there
To a burnin hell for worse to fare
stingin sand and the blindin glare
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As Jim says, well executed indeed....war is inhumane, robs all people involved of life, and their daily lives with loved ones and leave the suffering homeless....your voice carries here...Cindy
A drastic change of tone here Saadat; well executed. You portray the folly of war with considerable success - the richness and freshness of the images gives your work much strength. jim
A code and an evacuation. An escape from the encroaching forces. Stuffed with much of the operational frames This poem brings a whole story of the war game. largest helicopter evacuation And Fall of Saigon Is remembered through these hefty lines. Thanks for this great write and remembrance.