Monday, April 13, 2009

Brit-Am Veteran Woes ……a Soliloquy From Af-Pak Comments

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O man on the hill you sent us there
To a burnin hell for worse to fare

stingin sand and the blindin glare
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Vidi Writes 07 June 2009

A code and an evacuation. An escape from the encroaching forces. Stuffed with much of the operational frames This poem brings a whole story of the war game. largest helicopter evacuation And Fall of Saigon Is remembered through these hefty lines. Thanks for this great write and remembrance.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 25 April 2009

As Jim says, well executed indeed....war is inhumane, robs all people involved of life, and their daily lives with loved ones and leave the suffering homeless....your voice carries here...Cindy

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Jim Hogg 19 April 2009

A drastic change of tone here Saadat; well executed. You portray the folly of war with considerable success - the richness and freshness of the images gives your work much strength. jim

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