In the 'Add New Poem' instructions PH says 'Take a deep breathe',
but it should say 'breath' [rhymes with death], so I now DO grieve!
It's a grammatical error, one even (I think) 'Bri' has made in the past,
AND I'll bet my high school English teachers would....now be aghast!
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Thank you Bri for including two of my poems to your showcase. Much appreciated x
Exciting poems! Pity that none of my poems find a coveted place in this august showcase!
'au·gust (ô-gŭst′) adj. Respected and dignified: the august presence of the monarch. See Synonyms at grand.' OK! bri
At first I thought 'U' forgot the month and about capitalizing 'August'. I've probably NEVER used 'august' (with small 'a') before. ;)
ATTENTION READERS: ....................I HAVE A 'PART TWO' SUBMITTED AND PLAN TO USE IT TO SHOWCASE MORE FIND POEMS 'AS TIME ALLOWS'. bri ;)
Two beautiful poems have been added to the showcase.I can relate to Smoky Hoss' poem.Sometimes even familiar place looks strange or in a sense foreign to us.
I wish long lives to the showcases.This is a lovely Showcase, but comprises of two poems only.I hope you are in the process of collecting! Thank you Bri Edwards for your effort and time.
Thanks, Bharati, but, I guess you didn't see my notes indicating that there WILL BE MORE POEMS ADDED if Mother Nature and PH allow me to add. bri : )
I remember writing a comment on this showcase. But it looks like it has not appeared. Enjoyed reading the poems a second time now. Your notes are interesting and as always with a pinch of humour that makes the showcase even more enjoyable....10