Monday, January 28, 2019

Bri's Edited & Reactivated: 3-Minute Novel: ….[ Depression; Mid-Life Crisis; Porn ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

Steve lived alone. His wife had up and left him,
and gone away with a widowed neighbor, ...Paul.
Steve and Jane's marriage never was too great,
and their fights had increased five-fold of late.
...
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Tom Allport 11 February 2019

A very sad tear jerker of a man and his best friend living alone and not eating the right food, yes it was a recipe for disaster? Especially having a loaded gun to hand! ..........totally gripping stuff Bri

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Bri Edwards 09 February 2019

For Aunty Septic, the first one to leave a comment here: (and for others who may be interested) READ THIS: Steve's Best Cellar, (3-Minute Novel) .... An A D D E N D U M ….[ What Really Happened; Depression Treatment; A Bit Long; Fiction ] bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 07 February 2019

I thought it would be just a three minute read! Mid life crises is nothing compare to what more older citizens are facing. They are the one who do not have much choices with their frail body and limbs to take care of themselves but are still expected to. Steve certainly has many choices.

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Paul Brookes 02 February 2019

Oh very dark very dark but the moral is well there is no moral

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Kim Barney 28 January 2019

Depressing, Bri! With tears you've made our faces wetter; now write something to make us feel better!

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