You think you know this fine poet, Bri,
but don't believe it. I'll tell you why.
I'm NOT the handsome dude you all love,
and I've not come….from Heaven above!
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Hmmm! Bri, although you are the lyingest poet on ph, as is N Modi among the 1400 m in India, unlike him, this time you are telling the truth.
(cont,) .... 'losing' the comment. I now am beginning to 'fear' that I might lose THIS, so I MUST 'copy' it just in case bri
(cont.) .......THEIR COMMENTS! ! 'We' used to be able to safely type LONG comments with little or no chance of....(cont.)
Your third stanza is an utter lie. You never go with the flow of any writer. Sometimes you overdo your review. An interesting poem, Bri. Well expressed.
R M, YOUR IMMENSE GENEROSITY with comments is MUCH appreciated by me. IT IS SO TRUE about PH not/NOT giving commenters a WARNING! ! to LIMIT THE LENGTH OF (cont.)
Poetry or any art never springs out of nowhere. You must have knowledge, wit and talent to bring something to your readers.
I am back to give more comments..... As regards second stanza, I can't comment on status and your wants in life. I have read many poems you have submitted on this site and in my humble opinion they are crafted with wit and humor.
It is so frustrating when your comments are not accepted because they exceeded the required amount of words. Everything that I have written was rendered futile. There should be a notice first before you can send the comments.
The first stanza of your poem speaks of physical appearance and probably character and since we Poets here at PH meet online, we don't have any clue if your words are true or pure lies.
Hi Bri, the poem is funny.But why do you lie?