Bri's April-May 2022 Showcase Of 4 Poems Offered To Me, In Response To My Recent ' Dare' Poem Comments
Bri's Introductory Poem:
I had a GREAT INTRODUCTORY POEM, which, from here, did disappear.
It's not the first & won't be the last words I've 'lost'; to lose more I do now fear.
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Thanks Bri for including my poem in your newest Showcase.Enjoyed reading all poems.
So...'sweatness' may lead to 'sweetness'! ! I really don't recall reading 'sweat' in the poem when I chose it, but I 'love' the line, UNNI. ;)
'The sweetness of roses and jasmine that spreads as you sweat' ...ahhh! This makes me think of a relationship founded, to a large extent, in a mutual quest for physical fitness ['sweat') bri : )
But, once I have seen all the poems that are in the showcase, I realise how poor my attempt is. Thank You Bri.
Actually, UNNI, I really think it is a fine success, NOT a poor attempt. It's even, AT LEAST, among the TOP FOUR poems presented here. [that's a joke; laugh now]Thanks. : ) bri
I had, in a very proud moment, offered the poem showcased here "Swallows" to Bri, sure that this was a very good one.
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7/18/2025 10:59:07 PM # 1.0.0
Thank you, Bri, for including my poem in this showcase. This website has really gone downhill since I joined, and YOU are one of the reasons why I stay.
OF COURSE I AM! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : ) BRI