Friday, January 1, 2016

Bring Together Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Your poem is still bringing people together years after it was written.

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M.J. Lemon 13 December 2023

I hope so, Rob. Thanks so much for reading.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2018

Great distances bring together two people who belong in one room.....touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem amazingly shared.

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Mj Lemon 21 November 2018

So very much appreciated. Thanks, Kumarmani.

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Muhammad Ali 13 September 2017

wow. first it is must they belong in one room, then let's see the magic of distance... hmm electron - proton. moon - earth. or he - she. give them a room and there will be no such magnetic poem... afterwards. beautiful

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2017

Thank you so much, Muhammad. Your words trigger thoughts and stir the soul. Thanks again.

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Valsa George 14 February 2017

Distances melt when two people are in close mental proximity! Physically they needn't be in one room....! What annihilates geographical distance is the unity of hearts! Great Senryu, Lemon!

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Mj Lemon 14 February 2017

Thank you, Valsa. And congratulations on #700. It's fantastic!

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Sarah Mkhonza 10 January 2017

I like the poem. Succinct and to the point about how life is.

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Mj Lemon 11 January 2017

Thank you so much, Sarah.

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2016

She is so far apart Yet closer to my heart Thank you, M.J. for insightful and inspiring poem that has brought back a lot of fun and loving moments for me.

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Mj Lemon 15 November 2016

Thank you for the kind words, Richard.

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Susan Williams 30 June 2016

I definitely believe in distance multiplying all the tender yearning emotions I have for people.... You did a wonderful job with this senryu, Mj, a wonderful job indeed.

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Mj Lemon 30 June 2016

Thank you so much, Susan. I always appreciate your comments. And yes, absence does make the heart grow fonder..

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Abderrahmane Dakir 17 February 2016

Two in one places bring all far distance, Thank you for sharing this wisdom.

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Mj Lemon 17 February 2016

Thank you, Abderrahmane. Sometimes the great distance is the only thing that can bring two people together.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 January 2016

The ways of life with the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 29 January 2016

And thank you, Edward. I really enjoyed my last visit with your page, your work. I'll be returning in the near future.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 January 2016

Very deep insight is shared in clever mind here. Definitely love brings closer to all and reduces distances. Fantastic theme shared.10

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Mj Lemon 02 January 2016

Thank you so much, Kumarmani. Your kind words are much appreciated.

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