Bring Together Poem by M.J. Lemon

Bring Together

Rating: 5.0


Great distances bring
together two people who
belong in one room

Friday, January 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: insight,introspection,melancholy,metaphor,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 23 February 2023

Your poem is still bringing people together years after it was written.

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M.J. Lemon 13 December 2023

I hope so, Rob. Thanks so much for reading.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2018

Great distances bring together two people who belong in one room.....touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem amazingly shared.

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Mj Lemon 21 November 2018

So very much appreciated. Thanks, Kumarmani.

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Muhammad Ali 13 September 2017

wow. first it is must they belong in one room, then let's see the magic of distance... hmm electron - proton. moon - earth. or he - she. give them a room and there will be no such magnetic poem... afterwards. beautiful

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2017

Thank you so much, Muhammad. Your words trigger thoughts and stir the soul. Thanks again.

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Valsa George 14 February 2017

Distances melt when two people are in close mental proximity! Physically they needn't be in one room....! What annihilates geographical distance is the unity of hearts! Great Senryu, Lemon!

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Mj Lemon 14 February 2017

Thank you, Valsa. And congratulations on #700. It's fantastic!

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Sarah Mkhonza 10 January 2017

I like the poem. Succinct and to the point about how life is.

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Mj Lemon 11 January 2017

Thank you so much, Sarah.

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