Thursday, March 12, 2009

Bring Out Your Dead Comments

Rating: 4.9

Bring out your Dead! !
He yells, and they walk out carring it, the box.
The box that holds his whole world, the memories he can't share with her again.
The moments that will never be, or the time that they will never spend. Together.
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Scott Daniels 27 March 2009

hmmm. I didn't particulary like this one at first but it really grew on me. You've created a good image in this, rather than describing the deceased you refer to is as your world emphasising the grief you feel. I also liked the image of putting your memories and experiences with the dead in the box. Alas, if only we could...

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Lazarus Knix 24 March 2009

'Bring out your Dead! He yells, to Me. And I do.' Beautiful work.

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Colin J... 12 March 2009

Terrific poem on a subject none of us want to think about... 10... Colin J...

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