Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Bring Me To Heaven! Comments

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From the time I strive to be immersed
An army of thoughts attack my heart!

Opposite to my hesitating pens
Boiling blood runs to Super One!
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 17 September 2012

Very entertaining piece. I think you are very right. Any praise spoken to us will certainly allow us to be in the heavenly abode, giving us that joy in the heart to be valued and recognized. This is a very human and common need. Thanks for writing this.

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Valerie Dohren 23 August 2012

A very nice write Eindary - you still young and you have time to develop your poetical talents. Keep writing.

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This is a good write thanks for sharing!

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