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superb ellias. i see bright Future for you. i wait for the next chapter of your story. lol.....

Again a good poem with a message! I like it... Terry

I do enjoy your poetry young Ellias. You honor me with your words. You know I can only control the seas in my imagination, as do all writers. It is here that we become Kings, Queens, Lords, noble warriors and Captains. I remember when you first contacted me and I saw the large plane in the background. You wanted to know if I traveled. I never fly, I only sail the seas of my imagination. One day I hope you become a pilot and fly that beautiful bird. You are welcome to sail with me, my young friend and of course we will invite Unwritten Soul. But remember the parrot is really in charge, and beware of Pirate Girl, she can be trouble sometimes.

Captain Cur is my fav pirate for all times, no pirates like him not even close...He is a good one :) even in wavy and stormy shaky my life i feel safe with him, because he is a good captain_Unwritten Soul

I really enjoyed.especially the irony in it.(Captain Cur) . also love the end of your poem. tnx

A fantastic poem, like it.

Really wonderful...I am sure that Captain Cur will praise you a lot!

The element of optimism is good indeed. But in reality the saviour keeps himself aloof. All the best young Ellias Anderson