Bring Me Home! Comments

You have quite an individualistic voice- tell me please, is this the lyrics to a song? I find myself wanting to sing it... One way or another, you speak straight from the heart. There's a cloud that surrounds me, and it just keeps chasing me around. Feel the snow that's falling apon us, collecting on the ground.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Those are such well-chosen visuals and as such pack the honesty and the emotion you want your reader to feel. Very good write, Rebecca. A well-deserved 10!