Monday, January 4, 2016

Bring Back My Sorrows Comments

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I had all this emptiness for me
A gift from my lonely sojourns
And it embraced me and my inner being
You came along and it suddenly dawns
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Brian Rop
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Winter Wyte 12 January 2016

oh gosh that that was all like whoosh and then splash and then at the end blam and i didnt even see it coming that was awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Wayne Kingston 06 January 2016

Very interesting treatment of a compelling topic. Well done, Brian.

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Folorunso Oladipo Daniel 04 January 2016

Nice work...... It reminds me what inspired me to write 'An Anthrapment'

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