Saturday, June 27, 2015

Bring Back Brotherhood Comments

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When the sun dives
Make haste, return to your hive
You’ll stay alive
When the sun is swallowed by the evening sky, evil men thrive
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Dedan Onyango 14 July 2015

A very powerful message coming from the right source. Good use of alliteration.

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Roseann Shawiak 30 June 2015

Very well written, with a great message to unite and get rid of the evil destroying the good in our world. A very inspiring poem, Abdalla! I agree with you, bring back brotherhood! Love it! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Abdalla Juma Shenga

Abdalla Juma Shenga

Mombasa, Kenya
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