Bring About Peace Comments

Shujat Ahmad and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

Like 14 Apr by Mr. Frivolous to Bring about peace

great Nomak'hosi Adonts'i18 minutes ago this evil money cannot purchase or bring peace back home... Great Comment +1

that's so beautiful my sweet Anna Laurencio26 minutes ago that's so beautiful my sweet c'est si beau mon doux,

that's so beautiful my sweet Anna Laurencio26 minutes ago that's so beautiful my sweet c'est si beau mon doux,

Tell me more. Caroline Carolina13 minutes ago I like how it started, then slowly expanded. The condition of the past connecting with shame, blame and maybe a bit regret for the time passing. I just feel like you had more to say and the rhyme is not forced, didn't seem like it forced you to say things but they were your own opinion though I think you would've hit home dead on without it. Just a personal opinion. Don't mind me, keep writing, it was a pleasure and honor to read you. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago u r touching my nerve. it is simple way of putting after experience

Nice feel Dude Zero19 minutes ago Has amazing feel..but it could have been better, felt something could have been added..not sure what! ! Comment +1

Money can't buy happiness. Sean Yong23 minutes ago Stable structure. Well composed. Skillful execution, but it lacked Oomph. The X factor that would captivate the audience was seemingly absent.

I can feel shame But pass no blame