Sunday, November 21, 2004

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I was just nine - you caught my eye,
you stunned me with your smile.
I stood with friends when you swayed by,
I thought of you a while.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Allan James Saywell 22 November 2004

I nice little float back in the past, well written by a good poet, as a man i think of it as the one i missed out on, but herbert that's just me, then again she could have been special.herbert you have a great ability of making the moment last thank you regard's AJS

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Lenchen Elf 21 November 2004

Sweet, it reminds me of one of my favourite little things. 'The Look' by Sarah Teasdale

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