Tuesday, July 21, 2020

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Rating: 5.0

Disregarded prestige
To be thin for her parents' sake
She shot up the drugs
Encouraging the others
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Kingsley Egbukole 02 October 2023

For her parent's sake. This is sacrifice.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 October 2023

Beautifully written dear LeeAnn.5 stars

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Anjandev Roy 01 October 2023

She survived at all cost....... significant....

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 July 2020

Survival! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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