Promenading on a Sunday
Along Brighton beach so fine.
Breakers sculpting well worn pebbles
Sparkling in the soapy brine.
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The images in this poem are spot on! ! ! The seagulls laughing- - -a perfect word choice. Pebbles, soapy brine, dogs, children, surfboards, picnics... I am placed there on Brighton's beach, promenading with the best of them. I would love to see more poems written recently by you. [That's a hint, subtle, ain't i? ] Well done, very well done.
Thank you Susan. Your words are most complimentary. Brighton Prom is indeed a stimulating walk. Keep tuned.