Brightness Along The Way Comments
C-harming early sunrise
H-as made you rise up;
A-llowing the sky to get blue,
R-ain has begun to stop.
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So, this is a birthday poem! Nice thoughts. Day of birth - Does the noun 'birth' has any day? Day of my birth will make sense. Sorry, I just pointed out this. That is all. Wishing you all the very best on your birthday.
Thanks, Ravi.... for the constructive criticism.... I'll appreciate more in the future.... God bless...
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11/14/2025 10:23:13 PM # 1.0.0
A marvelous birthday acrostic. I love it, Bernard❤️❤️❤️