Leaves dance with the wind,
One peso fare to heaven,
Life's greener than green.
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very good you have choosen the bright side of the world nice one Krishna Baalu
Yes 'life is greener then green' and that is a terrific phrase - - a phrase which will stick in the readers mind - - and that makes good poetry - - - more please like this - - it has positive drive and I like the length too....... a well constructed piece....10 from Fay.
life is too short, dear poet. that's why it is important for us to appreciate God-given wonders. i know you can see that, i can feel it in this poem. you have the eyes of a poet, keep writing 10: -)