Friday, September 5, 2008

Bright Side Of The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaves dance with the wind,
One peso fare to heaven,
Life's greener than green.
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Juneil Sechico
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Smiley Hooker 03 June 2009

life is too short, dear poet. that's why it is important for us to appreciate God-given wonders. i know you can see that, i can feel it in this poem. you have the eyes of a poet, keep writing 10: -)

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Abdul Karim 21 February 2009

This is positive and a feeling that is great.nice write.

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Krishna Baalu 31 January 2009

very good you have choosen the bright side of the world nice one Krishna Baalu

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Fay Slimm 13 January 2009

Yes 'life is greener then green' and that is a terrific phrase - - a phrase which will stick in the readers mind - - and that makes good poetry - - - more please like this - - it has positive drive and I like the length too....... a well constructed piece....10 from Fay.

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~*emo*princess *~ 10 January 2009

i like the tenderness! ! ! ! i love it! ! !

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Lovely and very spiritual.

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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