Sunday, May 20, 2018

Bright Side Comments

Rating: 5.0

He left her and she thought that her world would shatter.
She felt like she had been beaten in an egg batter.
But she knew that she had to hold on.
And things would get better before too long.
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Lamar Cole
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Rini Shibu 21 May 2018

Though shattered she had to hold on..Wonderful lines

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Kostas Lagos 20 May 2018

Yes, this is the right message.Amazing poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 20 May 2018

Great positivity is ensconced in this poem.++10

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Rajnish Manga 20 May 2018

The chauvinism practiced by male members of the society needs to be resisted with an iron hand by women at the receiving end. Thanks. And keep her dignity and pride.

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