Bright Horizon Comments

Hope will bring us a better destiny without war, hate and pain we will rise to a smiling world! Lovely write!

Now this is that matters...bright horizon is a symbol of all the dreams and wishes.. very goo.

Beautiful poem filled with positivity, hopes are coming brightly. Now what is required in life...loved reading it.

a very nice work and a hopeful title! this world is really ugly and shameful with wars and guns and their prices...blood... but...but hopes still are in every where in Horizon in kind hearts...

Nice poem Ellias. Your use of the English language is quite unique... but, In the fourth line - do you mean 'pain'? - and, 'Light will keep you of grope' doesn't really make sense in English. I know what you are trying to say, but this phrase should be worded in a different way.

Such a beautiful poem, never regret to put all my trust and support on you_Soul