Thursday, January 21, 2010

Bright Future Ahead Comments

Rating: 4.0

The Rose
stands there.
Chubby, young.
Not entirely
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Aldo Rino Smiloveux Bell
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 January 2010

quite sad... but your figuratives are easy to understand and it makes a reader comprehend the poem easier... nice work!

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