redbird flight of noon
lavish burgundy on gold
off to anywhere
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I find a lot of substance in your poetry. Keep writing.
Thank you very much for your thoughts. I am glad you enjoy my poetry.
I find a lot substance in your poetry! How do you rely so much on two evil ladies? Of course, it's your choice! Anyway, this is a beautiful poem. Top score!
Beautiful and picturesque, loved it Evelyn.
Stunning images that depict the beauty of late summer and the forthcoming autumn. Another wonderful and well crafted haiku. Top Marks! ! !
Your worded paintings never fail. We must read and then hail. Another lovely and pleasing poetic, joyful gift.
I am so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you very much for your inspiriting words.
Beautiful imagery and wording, Evelyn. And a beautiful graphic to complement your wonderful poem.
I am so glad you liked both picture and poem, Richard. Thank you very much!